Rough Cut Class Feedback: 5 words you relate to our video

This is a word cloud of the words that people wrote about our music video.

Whilst it would appear that at least some of our narrative was clearly portrayed (breakup was the most common word), other words that were popular like rushed, shaky and confusing suggest that we need to make our narrative more obvious- as a lot of people are getting confused as to what our video is actually about.

To make sure that this does not happen for our final cut, we need to use our storyboards, and create shorter shorts- to ensure our narrative is clear and concise.